Noise Pollution Part 2

After meeting with my supervisor and discussing the story with other people and getting feedback I started meditating on what is useful for my story and what is not. Meanwhile, I have progressed on my thumbnail board. The main changes so far was replacing the 3rd scene of the railway to one of a American First Nations person as it tries to rest by her campfire (meanwhile being disturbed as a soldier fires a matchlock musket in the woods nearby) and further addition of light and dark values.